I like the death loop idea. Reminds me of the original ending from Ellison’s The City on the Edge of Forever. Excellent stuff, Howie.

HOW DID WE GET TO A HOTEL ?!

hold on…hold on….
nope im still not sure how we got to the hotel…i thought they were in a holding cell place like i said in my other comment…..??

regardless, i loved this and I agree with nick….the death loop just sounds horrid – in a good way

Simon and Blake weren’t in the holding cell; the action switched to Blake’s hotel room in Nick’s “Time is of Consequence”: http://ficlets.com/stories/12422
Before that, CMTKOM introduced us to other characters in a holding cell, in “The Night Chicago Died (pt. 1)”: http://ficlets.com/stories/12418

OOOOHHHHHH it all makes PERFECT sense now…i was deluding myself into thinking they were still in the holding cell DESPITE the reference to a hotel room – i just assumed the police officer was on crack…anyways…this makes much more sense now

thanks everyone for clearing up my inability to read ficlets properly

Wow. Killing a man multiple times in a row. Now that’s revenge!
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I hope the Kug doesn’t get loose. It sounds bad . . .