Comments on Running {OTOC challenge} by .:band baby:.

someday_93

Poor Lucy…if it was me I’d feel awful. Just one thing, though ~~- in the second paragraph, maybe “layed” should be “lay”? I dunno, just a thought. Great sequel!~~
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(Kermit!!!!)
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:56:46.
someday_93

dang strike through! sorry…
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:56:46.
.:band baby:.

yeah, it should be ‘lay’ thanks =) now we have to wait till Kermitgorf writes.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:56:46.
someday_93

Yes, we shall have to wait…I hate having to be patient…=)
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:56:46.
One Time, One Chance

aw lucy! tht’d reallly suck to run over your brother’s girlfriend’s dog… =[
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KERMIT !!!!!!!
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:56:46.
Kermitgorf

Confrontation the next in the Cee Cee,Joe saga.
i like how you made Cee Cee, in the 1st person, go over to the house to find the truth.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:56:46.