The dialogue is great… spot on… I can totally imagine these two girls. But am I missing the “twist ending” here?

I’m with Nick on this one. The dialogue was terrific! I think you could have made the twist more shocking by hinting at what it really means. If the girl always says the opposite of what she means, what else has she lied about? You could take that in any number of directions—the girls’ friendship is a sham, something important from the past was totally misconstrued, the girl has dark secrets… who knows? There’s so much potential here. Thanks for entering my challenge!

ya…I agree. the twist on this wasn’t that good. i had a brain fart on the twist. other wize it would’ve been better. oh well…at least I got some good practice. :)