mhmm… this is really good. love the metaphors, heh i think that’s the right device… five stars.

very nice =)

you know what I’m gonna do? the same thing is do to every persons story I comment on. Give a good comment and not ruin there credibility.

I love Tetris! won every level! although it never does end! It’s so funny when you play it so long that you see the little Tetris shapes before you go to bed. Great story! If I had five thumbs they would be up!

interesting, i like your writing style
mecca

Ooh, sublime!

Curse you, L-block! CURSE YOU !!

Amazing set-up throughout the whole ficlet, with great description and a window into the narrator’s mind that I love. Then the reveal at the end made me laugh. Great job.