pretty comical…although there were several spelling and grammar errors. I wasn’t too impressed with the story line, either. But I still think Tim was pretty funny!

where? I even put it on microsoft..

oh and thanks for the constructive critism, telling me you didn’t like my story made me feel great

I’m sorry! I meant punctuation errors.

There weren’t too many, but a few, like:
“WHAT? I CAN ’T HEAR YOU !” (forgot question mark)
“Oh (comma or period) then what are we doing?â€?

Really, no biggee.

ooooooo, them I’m sorry for getting made, I was just confused

*then, mad…. man that was horrible….

I fixed it!