well this surely calls for a sequel, I’m intrigued by the premise .. the guilt has gotten to him as well as the wild night out. You say so much in just 2 paragraphs that makes me want to know more about this guy.

I agree so much great description in such a small package. Where is this going? I need to know.

I can see a blood-soaked shirt in his closet or mud-caked shoes on the floor. Keep going!

Wow. I wish my first two ficlets had been this dang good. Amazing job, I’ll be watching for your stuff….contact.

So, you’ve had a well received start here in ficletdom. Lovely piece with such an inviting, suggestive ending…so many possibilities! Great stuff.
LoA

Wow, what a great ficlet! I keep wondering what happened and what’s gonna happen next. My imagination’s going crazy right now!
LoA

ooh…it’s all been said already, but wow!
LoA

When you told me you liked to write, you never told me you were_good_ at it! Marvellous stuff :)

A most well recieved start I’d say. This could go in some many directions, as everybody has already said. Let’s see if I can formulate some competent sentences and sequel this.