So, sad. Very well written. I really feel sorry for the girl.

Reminds me of when you’re lost in the supermarket as a kid and couldn’t find your parents.
Same sort of lost, empty feeling.

That was really well written.

One mistake: I think you meant hole instead of whole in the last paragraph.

I feel sorry for her too! Now she doesn’t have her daddy!
LoA

What happened to her dad??!?!!?

You’ll never find out! lol, jk

awww that’s so sad =( she needs someone there to hold her

A little girl with no daddy is one of the saddest things in the world (at least in my opinion)

did she die you are a cruel person writer i am like all sad now bring her dad back i mean it….just teasin 3.7 stars