I take it this was not the first time he strayed, but it might be his last. Nice descriptions. Catchy title too.

Wow. Wow. Wow. This is the fantasy of many women betrayed through infidelity, methinks. Heavy material done very well, with sparse imagery and dynamic pacing.
The only thing that throws this off a bit is that it is written in what I like to call a “wall of text.” Try chunking some of the sections into separate paragraphs and I think you’ll find it will help improve the pacing.

Nice job, and I like the title. This actually reminds me of a Drama piece I heard at a speech competition once.

good story , but the title would more accorately be “pissed off cheated on wifes can kill”, but i’m just being nitpicky! really good story!

Absolutely wonderful. Strong visual, meger description. Captured your reader quite well. Good job. Ana is quite right about creating paragraphs, however sometimes u need every letter.

To Chakatreatmentson:
Actually I had never thought of them as being a married pair. It does come off that way, I see now, but strangely that was never in my mind as I wrote it. Which makes her actions all the more extreme.

oh wow.
i most definetly agree with Wyatt Aspr. It is true that sometimes you just need that extra space to get in what you want.

but other than the “wall of text,” as Ana said, it was well written.

deathly fabulous! loved it! 5*