That was great! I love the tone! I just don’t understand how the dove lived. Was it that their love was so strong or something? Either way, amazing job on this. Very well written :]
Extremely poetic (haha, silly me, it is a poem). It had a very nice flow and rythm to it most of the time, with just a few iffy spots. That’s really quite impressive. Poetry can be really hard to write. (Good poetry, I mean). Excellent job!
Freedom
pianoman
Blusparrow
Dreamer