cute. nice work here. i would say it needs a sequel but i think that would ruin it, don’t you?

i don’t get it. lol.

(reread it again)

oooh!!! lol ok i get it now! it makes a lil more sense. lol.. sry!

Cute ending, but you had a bit of redundancy in here. “He had no idea where he was going, or where his destination would be.” That’s kind of the same thing. I’d revise it to: “He had no idea where he was, or where his destination would be.”